I aspire to be a better son,
An ideal brother, at least a better one,
The best husband; a lover and a companion,
A little more romantic, a bit more fun,
A lot more learned, a bit more erudite,
Just keep going and win over the tide,
Want to be more me, & grow as a person,
Just a teeny bit is left, a weeny bit is done…
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doc2poet 
An aspiring post and it seems like you are raising the bar from time to time to reach the pinnacle of perfection in relationships…all the best to your desires..
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Thank you so much Sunita…I hope to see a better me tomorrow:-)
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Nice one!
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Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it:-)
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🙂
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Aww these are wonderful things to aim for and love how you put it beautifully in poetry. 🙂
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Thank you so much ameena…hope I can make it there:-)
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Good luck with being a near ‘perfect’ one 🙂
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Thank you so much Alok:-)
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Very well said. We’re all works in progress like that 🙂
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🙂
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Loved reading it. nice one.
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Thank you Jyotirmoy:-)
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Hi buddy,
amazingly expressed lines….
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Thank you so much Nikita:-)
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To know that the thought crossed your mind and that you decided to act on it itself needs to be applauded. If each of us strive to be a better person, the Earth would definitely change in ten days. 🙂
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Very well said Ranjini:-)
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Your thoughts that cherish relationships so beautifully make you all the more ‘better’…!
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I am feeling better for sure…thank you Sunaina for stopping by:-)
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Very well expressed and all the very best for your desires. 🙂
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Thank you so much Ashish:-)
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Don’t try to be someone ,be who you are
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Exactly, but I want to evolve into a better version of me:-)
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You are best already
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🙂
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Nice one.
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Thank you so much:-)
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So much said in simple words.
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Glad you liked it Chaitali…Thank you so much:-)
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Hi There! Visiting from the A to Z Road Trip! Looking forward to reading your blog posts.
Cheers!
@simplymarquessa from
Simply Marquessa
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Thank you Marquessa…hope you like what you see….Thanks for stopping by 😊
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Hello from the A to Z Post-Challenge Road Trip. It’s nice to stop by and visit via this more leisurely route. Have a wonderful day!
Trisha Faye
http://www.trishafaye.wordpress.com
http://www.embracinglifetribe.wordpress.com
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Thank you so much for visiting my blog…hope you like it:-)
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Very well written. Precise and to the point.
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Thank you so much Tajammul:-)
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May you receive much more than you ever aspired to be! 🙂
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I can only hope so…Thank you for your wishes:-)
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