बहुत सुँदर … शब्दों का मायाजाल अति उत्तम .. जल में जल की माया , जल से ही पाया , कूप है या सागर साँझ ही नहीं पाया । हमने तो ज़िंदगी ही कूप में रह कर बिता दी पता ही नहीं चला ।
Glad that you’ve started writing Hindi haiku poems. Amitji and Kokila do write Hindi haiku and they both are wonderful. 🙂
Loved this one. “कूपंन्डुक” is a word much used in Bengali. It’s used as a proverb to signify a shallow person with a limited knowledge. I smiled too at the last line because in our school days we were supposed to make sentences with such words… 😀 Not an enjoyable memory… 😛
Thank you so much Maniparna…Haiku for me is new and a bit tricky…to convey something in so few words is not always easy…I have read both Kokila and Amitji and they are awesome…I learned this word only recently , thanks to Devdutt pattnaik. It is actually from our ancient texts and I loved it instantly…Glad I could use it in a Haiku…Thanks again Maniparna:-)
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Nicely written…i was smiling at the last line 🙂
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Thank you shweta…it means a lot ☺
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Bahut khoob!
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शुक्रिया आलोक ☺ There’s so much to learn and I am just getting started…
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Everybody starts somewhere ☺️
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Yes, but it should never stpo☺
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Stop
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खूबसूरत
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शुक्रिया ☺
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So thoughtful…..you also taught my a new word….:)
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Thank you sunaina…I loved it when I heard it for the first time…it belongs to our ancient texts…☺
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Beautiful
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Thank you Rupam☺
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बहुत सुँदर … शब्दों का मायाजाल अति उत्तम .. जल में जल की माया , जल से ही पाया , कूप है या सागर साँझ ही नहीं पाया । हमने तो ज़िंदगी ही कूप में रह कर बिता दी पता ही नहीं चला ।
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शुक्रिया 🙂 वैसे जब जागो तभी सवेरा 🙂
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Happy Independence Day:-)
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Thank you and same to you and to all in the family 🙂
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🙂
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Glad that you’ve started writing Hindi haiku poems. Amitji and Kokila do write Hindi haiku and they both are wonderful. 🙂
Loved this one. “कूपंन्डुक” is a word much used in Bengali. It’s used as a proverb to signify a shallow person with a limited knowledge. I smiled too at the last line because in our school days we were supposed to make sentences with such words… 😀 Not an enjoyable memory… 😛
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Thank you so much Maniparna…Haiku for me is new and a bit tricky…to convey something in so few words is not always easy…I have read both Kokila and Amitji and they are awesome…I learned this word only recently , thanks to Devdutt pattnaik. It is actually from our ancient texts and I loved it instantly…Glad I could use it in a Haiku…Thanks again Maniparna:-)
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Welcome… 🙂
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🙂
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Awesome. Thanks for sharing the meaning of that word, otherwise i had to search for a dictionary.
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Thank you Sowjanya…glad you liked it:-)
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Very nice haiku. Made me think for sometime 🙂
Cheers!
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Thank you Anoop…that’s what poetry is about…glad you liked it 😊
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Very good attempt . But for ppl who donot have adequate knowledge of difficult Hindi words , please give glossary of the words .
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Thanks for the tip sir…I have included it here…will take extra care from now on 😊
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Bahut hi sunder!
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शुक्रिया मृदुला 🙂
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