Hello blog-chatterers,
I am new here and I absolutely loved the Blogchatter’s prompt for this week- I wish I were. I write more often in Hindi but I didn’t know I could do that here or not. So I just tried my hand at both. Hope you like them.
होता अगर मैं
होता अगर मैं बेबाक परिन्दा , छूता उचईयाँ जैसे कोई बाज़;
काव्य सी होती उड़ानें मेरी, और बादल होते मेरे अल्फ़ाज़;
नदियों में ही खिलता बचपन, उन्मुक्त हवा मे लेता श्वास;
हर दिन रचता गीत नये, और समय ही होता मेरा साज़;
होता अगर मैं बेबाक परिंदा, नवजीवन लेता अगाज़;
उड़ता फिरता मस्त गगन में, अजब ही होता मेरा अंदाज़ ||
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I wish I were
I wish I were a free bird,
never caged but often heard;
Scaling high and sinking low,
never shaken but often stirred;
I wish I were a free bird,
singing at will… lovely or absurd;
Quenching my fernweh*,
cruising alone and bewildered;
I wish I were a free bird,
I’ll be happy …mark my word;
‘Coz deep down inside,
this luftmensch# is a caged bird…
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*Fernweh (German): Feeling homesick for a place you have never been to, wanderlust, a desire/craving to travel, a longing for far-off places.
#Luftmensch (German): Someone with his head in the clouds, one who is unconcerned with such practical matters as earning a living, a dreamer, social misfit.
This post is written for Blogchatter’s prompt for the week- I wish I were .
Gracias . Post is written beautifully in Hindi & English with sprinkling of German words . Wish I could also write in Hindi to translate a few stories from my Book : Journey from Guwahati to Machhiwara ( enters 16 countries , 118 libraries India , 3 in USA
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Thank you Rajiv ji…glad to have such inspiring words from an author. Good luck for your book:-)
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Hope you get chance to read it . I know you are a busy man .
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I will grab them asap:-)
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I loved this poem ! This one is so deep 🙂 And I preferred it in Hindi more 🙂
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Thank you so much Richa…I love Hindi poetry more myself:-)
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Loved the hindi poem a lot… You also introduced me to two new words in German🙂
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Thank you sunaina…I like such new words and to experiment with them in poetry:-)
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Beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you so much Purba:-)
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Beautiful
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Thank you Rupam😊
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I like the way you write in both the languages !! Also the lines are really amazing.
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Thank you so much shraddha😊
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Loved it.
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Thank you jyotirmoy☺
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Lovrly poem. Beautiful take on I wish I were.
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Thank you so much somali 😊
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I wish I could express myself so freely and elegantly in Hindi like you. Loved this! 🙂
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Glad you liked it Arti…thanks a lot😊
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Glad you liked it Arti…thanks a lot 😊
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Beautiful poetry , this post is very very inspiring and thanx for developing my vocab , learnt two new words..
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Thank you jyotsana…glad you liked it… I may have a few more words up my sleeve…😊
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I am desperately waiting for those words with my sleeves down to catch .. 😊👍
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Coming soon…😊👍
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Awaited 🙂
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Glad to hear that. I have a little too much on my plate right now but trying to nudge these cogs together so that they start moving each other…my love for writing will keep it coming😊
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How’s junior Amit .. love and blessings to him .. do take care of him , its his first winters .. I can just imagine the warmth when the mother cuddles her baby :)feels heaven
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He is doing great…I know it’s too cold for him but we are being extra cautious…everything about him is beautiful and that includes our lives too…
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Aah I know , please take care of him 🙂
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On duty 24X7😊
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lovely! like it
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Thank a lot for the like:-)
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बहुत खूब लिखा है आपने !वाह
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शुक्रिया वैभव 🙂
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